On writing

[wiseheart]

I think I just had a revelation recently.

When I started writing in English, about a decade and a half ago, when the Tolkien fandom was on its film-induced boost, I used to hear people complaining about run-in sentences left, right and center. That made me very nervous; firstly because I tend to build long, complicated sentences (which is an infestation from German literary language, I think), and secondly because I used to be even more insecure about my English than I'm now.

However, recently I read a lot of fanfic in the Sherlock fandom, and I think I finally begin to understand what all those people meant all those years ago. There are interesting stories that I actually like, but they make me incredibly tired after a couple of chapters, because the author writes in a hectic manner that make it hard to make out the individual sentences.

Considering that these authors are usually native English speakers, I think I'm not doing all that bad, in comparison.

Comments

[lindahoyland.livejournal.com]

It took me awhile to learn to shorten my sentences when I started story writing. I think you write well.

[sammydragoncat]

my cousin, who is a college professor, was always complain about the undergraduates papers and their use of run on sentences. You know I like the way you write, and when I first started reading your stories - I did not initially realize that English is not your strongest language.