It was flowing, sort of, until it got hacked to pieces. I could glue it together again, but it's the same as with a broken vase: it might be knitted, but it will leak water anyway.
I wanted to iron out some bumps, not to completely revamp the story. I'll just leave it.
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Date: 2011-09-13 07:17 pm (UTC)I wanted to iron out some bumps, not to completely revamp the story. I'll just leave it.