The Shoemaker's Daughter 2

[wiseheart]

Yep, I've finally come around to update that story. Actually, Chapter 2 has been finished for several months by now, but I wasn't sure whether or not I should keep all the descriptions I'm so overly fond of. As my poor, generous beta has been caught up with RL issues, I posted a copy to Otherworlds, hoping that people would tell me what they think. They haven't so far. So I decided to post the chapter the way it is. There might be some corrections later, but actually, I like it this way and will probably keep it so. We'll see.

In any case, here you can find Chapter 2: Old Craban

It's the main Halabor story, in case you were wondering. Enjoy!

Comments

[yeesalu.livejournal.com]

I just read your story on SoA and it really captured my attention. I really felt like I was there and knew these people, because you've done such a wonderful job! Your characterization and descriptions really set the stage. You've drawn a whole world in two chapters.

You're such a talented writer -- I'll definitely keep a look out for your work! Thanks for sharing it with us.

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Thanks for the feedback. It keeps the muse happy. :))
If you liked the little town, you might be interested in "The Last Yule in Halabor" as well, which features (partly) the same people.