Birthright update

[wiseheart]

The new chapter is here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2155112/4/

A rewrite of the episode A Rose in the Ashes, from Tyr's POV, which means no Dylan Hunt at all, for a whole episode.


I don't expect much feedback on this one. Got three pieces already (two of them privately), and that's all I can hope for. It seems the Andromeda section is overflooded with stories where impossible things happen, just to make for the most unlikely characters to have pretty, pretty babies together.

At least on the first page, that is. When I fear bolder, I might check out older stuff. But I'm just too tired for that right now.

Comments

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I was sobbing all the time... *g* Glad you liked the story. I meant you as I mentioned one piece of the private feedback... as private as LJ can be, of course.

I've started writing the next chapter (I plan two more to the end, unless they get too long and I have to break them), with big Tyr moments, and Freya getting major drools from mere humans, hehehe.

[jilba.livejournal.com]

yeah, I can tell you look like you've been sobbing I don't think!

Thanks for mentioning me, and I'll try to keep the good work with feedback! I really hope I get to see Tyr thump someone!