Outtakes 01 - finished... and desperately needs a beta

[wiseheart]

It's grown to an impressive one-shot, reaching Page #20 with the notes and disclaimer and stuff. I enjoyed writing it very much, but as it has implied slash, I don't want to send it to my generous beta who doesn't like that kind of stuff.

So, any volunteers ready to face my creative grammar? I'd be eternally grateful.

Otherwise I'll post it as it is now, but I'd prefer to have a cleaned up version.

Comments

[ma2d2.livejournal.com]

I'd be happy to help, as long as you know that I've never beta'd before.

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! Basically, it is grammar work, since I am not a native speaker. Plus, pointing out possible contradictions within the story, or if I managed to say the same thing twice, which is known to have happened in the past. /grins/

If you PM me your address, I will send you the stuff. Thanks again!