Outtakes 01 - finished... and desperately needs a beta

It's grown to an impressive one-shot, reaching Page #20 with the notes and disclaimer and stuff. I enjoyed writing it very much, but as it has implied slash, I don't want to send it to my generous beta who doesn't like that kind of stuff.

So, any volunteers ready to face my creative grammar? I'd be eternally grateful.

Otherwise I'll post it as it is now, but I'd prefer to have a cleaned up version.