"Innocence" chapter revision

Chapter 6: Stirring of Hearts - Lalaith has finally been revised. You can find it here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=723815&chapter=9

This was something I've been planning for almost a year, and it's a great relief that it's finally done. The credit should go to Jenn, for all her useful suggestions and grammar corrections. Without her, this task wouldn't be possible at all. The remaining mistakes are mine, due to my stubborn nature.

No, this is not the new chapter yet. But it's something that needed to be done.

Last entry for today, I swear

So, thank to Erunyauve and Finch who managed to bribe my stupid inner fangurrrrrl, the annoying git finally released her hostage - Chapter 13: Sleeping Demons of Innocence - and allowed me to post it to ff.net.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=723815&chapter=18

The chapter contains the small part of Angelimir, the Sword-dancer and has Elrond's whole family making a rest among the ruins of Eregion while on their way to Lórien.

Oh, and Finch, you are right, of course! The archery competition is very different now from the earlier version of chapter 6. :))