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So, as promised, here comes the other half of the songbook, in three different versions. As before, first the original, then my first and second versions (and no, there won't be a third version, thank you very much).



Page 5







Page 6 - the cow kneading the dough
(As you can see, the original looks like a pig with a bowtie on its head. Or a propeller. My cow, OTOH, are happy ones.)







Page 7 - the bear, waiting for the loaf to bake through







Page 8 - the chicken and the ant, sharing the bread








Other than this, we had laundry day and I started some new projects (no, the two quiet books still need to be bound), of which I'll tell you folks later in detail. This photo posting is hard work; I leave the linking of the ideas for tomorrow.

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Date: 2024-02-03 06:01 pm (UTC)
bk_forever: (Ianto Little Smile)
From: [personal profile] bk_forever

You're so right about that poor cow in the original book! It doesn't even have nostrils, and the original bear isn't much better.



I love that your oven door opens so the bread can be seen inside baking.

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Date: 2024-02-03 06:13 pm (UTC)
meathiel: (Winter Teddy Window)
From: [personal profile] meathiel
Your cows definitely look much better!

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Date: 2024-02-03 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com
Actually, the original oven did that, too, I just forgot to open the door when I took the picture. Ooops! *g*
The original bear looks terribly depressed, I think. Perhaps he doesn't like bread?

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Date: 2024-02-03 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com
And happier, too! ;)

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Date: 2024-02-03 06:44 pm (UTC)
bk_forever: (Ianto Little Smile)
From: [personal profile] bk_forever

Ah, I see!



Maybe the original bear is just bored with waiting for the bread to cook.

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Date: 2024-02-03 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salariman.livejournal.com
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Date: 2024-02-03 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Again I think your versions are much more friendly and will be loved by any small child.

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Date: 2024-02-04 08:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] red-day-dawning.livejournal.com
Your animals definitely have more personality. The cows look so sweet-natured.

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Date: 2024-02-04 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noadvertising.livejournal.com

You are so right with the pig with the bowtie, which pretends to be a cow!

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Date: 2024-02-04 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com
And that from an animal that hibernates during winter. *g*

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Date: 2024-02-04 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com
Thanks. :)

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Date: 2024-02-04 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com
I hope so. Evie will have — hopefully — three grandchildren by the time this sucker is finished.

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Date: 2024-02-04 06:12 pm (UTC)
bk_forever: (Ianto Little Smile)
From: [personal profile] bk_forever

There's a difference between sleeping, and waiting for food.

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Date: 2024-02-04 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com
They are happy cows. I do love cows, so perhaps that's what comes through.

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Date: 2024-02-04 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com
It does look ridiculous, doesn't it? Even the ears hang like those of a pig.

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Date: 2024-02-06 12:25 am (UTC)

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Date: 2024-02-07 11:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mirasaui.livejournal.com

I love your versions, every page — just too cute!

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