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2018-08-13 10:43 pm (UTC)
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The part with the elf healer is good, although I want to know more about her-she sounds interesting.
I think the deal with the paragraph is that it needs to be broken into more parts. Did not come too abruptly.
It's been a while since I've read the books, but I remember that description.
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I think the deal with the paragraph is that it needs to be broken into more parts. Did not come too abruptly.
It's been a while since I've read the books, but I remember that description.