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2011-10-03 07:43 pm (UTC)
Re: A birthday gift, in Hobbit-fashion
Thanks. I'm glad you like it. :)
So, do you think it's better this way? The original version started with the descriptions in the middle and totally lacked any protagonists. Was this what you thought when you suggested to turn it around?
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Re: A birthday gift, in Hobbit-fashion
So, do you think it's better this way? The original version started with the descriptions in the middle and totally lacked any protagonists. Was this what you thought when you suggested to turn it around?