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wiseheart ([personal profile] wiseheart) wrote2006-01-27 01:30 pm
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The Prisoner of Dol Guldur - Epilogue

Although the story is still no way near being finished, a few days ago what I think is the perfect epilogue just jumped into my mind. You can read in on [livejournal.com profile] edhellondawards, and yes, don't fear to tell me what you think.

Actually, this part was grown from an Ages-old grudge I feel for Professor Tolkien. Yes, you saw it rightly. I'm very angry at the Professor for the end he gave that poor Arwen. All the Arwen-bashing of the inane fanpoodles couldn't be half as cruel as what he did to that poor woman.

Let's see the list:
1. Give up immortality for a man? Check.
2. Have said man leave her behind, alone and confused and in incredible pain, just because he decided it would be the proper thing to die while he was still in best form, just like a primadonna retiring on the peak of her dancing career? Check.
3. Die alone in Lórien that has withered away since Granma and her sparky Ring aren't conserving it any longer? Check.
4. Be forgotten by the very people whose Queen she has been for a frigging century? Check.

If you ask me, being eaten by a Balrog would have been faster and perhaps less painful. So I gave that poor woman at least some support.

[identity profile] jastaelf.livejournal.com 2006-01-28 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I've always thought Arwen was silly not to have the best of both worlds. When Primo Don was checking out at the height of his fame, Legolas was still there.... :-) She could have had him escort her to Lorien, set up housekeeping, and been perfectly happy until all three of them set sail (Arwen, Legolas, and his Dwarf buddy!) for Valinor... where they could have happily chatted about the times when Aragorn thought he looked SO cool, but had spinach in his teeth.... *g*

I love your writing. And I love your sense of the ironic!

Hugs,
Jasta

[identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com 2006-01-28 05:05 pm (UTC)(link)
There is a reason why you are honorary member of the DOLC, you know. *g*

For that you deserve a handsome Avari. *points at icon* That is Alagos, by the way. Played by Sean Bean. Avarified by [livejournal.com profile] archet, the talented one.

[identity profile] lhun-dweller.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
Hmmm... an Arwen/Legolas/Gimli menage a trois? Do I smell a plotbunny???

(A bunny that vaguely squicks me, so I won't be taking it home...but maybe someone else out there would like to play with it?)

[identity profile] wiseheart.livejournal.com 2006-01-31 03:58 pm (UTC)(link)
A what? Oh, you were reflecting to Jasta's suggestion! Well, she has an idea about an Arwen/Legolas/Aragorn triangle, although she still has to write that one. After she has finished Dark Leaf, that is.