will have a look at it sometime :) but with increasingly complicated summer plans may not be for some time (am so far behind with reading in general).
While writing correctly or clearly is important for a story it isn't the most important thing - after all grammer can be corrected by others but redeaming a bad story is far harder. :)
In fanfiction, I have found myself in awe of how so many non-native english speakers write such good English, especially when compared to many of the native speakers. I remain amazed by the ammount of work these people (you especially, on all of t, not just grammer) put into it. :)